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唐韵联七基础班第六讲B组作业帖 评阅老师:悠远 |
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2出,古仄,另外有雪的时候,翠柳,春,还是隔景了。
3梅香,半月,不工
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5入句,如同,没对上;深醉,润心,没对上
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1好句
2中规中矩
3梅香,明月,欠工
4不错
5画面感挺好
6繁花,柳絮,繁字没对出来
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