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3待舟归,动词可再练5艺念多费解。对而不联了这句
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2一扇就好,千不一定要对万。一反而四两拨千斤。对联很不错哈,继续加油!
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句子很不错,赞!
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2拍石都是入声字3为春开4后三词性5也是词性注意
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1用今音3娇花吧4关联不够;急拂都是入生字
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45词性和后三都不稳
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