楼主: 默然听雨
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子虚组第五讲作业贴 (点评:信马由缰老师) |
发表于 2020-10-16 20:04:50
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1还好,2第一句字数不等,2诗句味道,3对联味道,加油
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发表于 2020-10-17 10:49:59
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发表于 2020-10-17 11:19:48
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